E-Portfolio_v2.0: On feedback (Feedback step by step)

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make sure you understand the aim of the e-portfolio. Think of the target audience - can you identify it?
at first describe what you can see. focus on facts. Use evidence, not hypothesis.

Oh, what a wonderful graphics! I simply love the colour! And teh backround, too, really astonishing and elegant with this fancy font.

I can see you selected red as a leading colour. It makes quite a contrast to the white backround.

Write/ say what is importat to the author and what he/she can built upon.

Good work! Nice, well done. Not so good this time.

I think that if the file was provided in different format it would be easier to open it. Perhaps you can record this speech.

Avoid definite statements "you never - you always". Labelling is hardly useful and distracts the overall picture.

But you never get involved in the projects! / You haven't been involved in an internal project since 2005.

It was tipical of you to enroll in the alpinism course. / You've been involved in it for years so this course is a follow-up to your activities.

Alumni of this school have always been good at math. / Half of the students from this school have chosen math related studies.

Describe the effect/ result

Great! I liked it!

It is easier to read the text because of this layout. Red attracts the viewers' attantion. It distracts me.

Focus on behavior and results that can be changed, but not on the person.Describe the consequences.

You are so nice and you have such a nice smile that it is difficult for the clients to concentrate on the subject when they talk to you.

I can see that you burs into a laud laugh when talking to a client. It can be distractive for them.

If relevant, describe your feelings

I like the colours you used for th backround.
I don't like when my text is used without referencing.

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